Plot
summary
Scene 1: The scene starts with a high angle shot from the
ground from behind Jenkinson who is tied to a chair. It cuts to Murphy and
Skinner who are leading an unofficial, off the grid interrogation of Jenkinson
in an unknown shack.
Step by step scene 1:
- Murphy talks about his ex-policing partner in front of Jenkinson, talking about how good a man he was.
- Skinner looks on anxiously as Murphy talks.
- Jenkinson makes a rude, sarcastic remark about the murder victim and Murphy hits him, Skinner looks on shocked
- Jenkinson claims it could have been anyone who killed him, and that Murphy and skinner have no evidence
- Skinner looks at Jenkinson sternly to remind him of their deal
- Murphy claims that Skinner has researched the case thoroughly and has found lots of information pointing towards Jenkinson, and mentions Jenkinson past of repeated offences
- Jenkinson talks of his previous offences, and mentions Murphy’s ex-partner put him away for one of them, and makes yet another offensive comment towards him
- Murphy insists that he shuts up and hits Jenkinson again, much harder
- Skinner tells Murphy to calm down, and asks him to stop hitting Jenkinson
- Murphy grabs Skinner and shouts at him reminding him of the crime and claims he needs to be punished
- Over Murphy’s shoulder we see Jenkinson smirking at skinner, Murphy turns around and sees him
- Murphy shouts at Jenkinson and grabs him by the throat
- The shot rises to the roof while all that can be heard is punching and wheezing
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